WOW!!!! Nice details they really make you fell Mollie’s emotions and all her family passed away she still had hope. But I don’t understand by what you mean on the 2nd to last page when you said”later after she had found out that her sister died she knew she had to give it away.”
I like the plot line of the story and what sickness did Mollie’s mom get.
I like how much detail you put into the character because I could really feel how the character was feeling it was clear if they were sad or happy. The only thing I found was that you did not make it that clear if the mom died or not and I got a little confused.
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