Well lets start from the beginning of my life, ok so picture a sandy beach with the waves crashing down, I was there in a damp, dark, shell. I was breaking free well trying it is kinda hard well anyway the wet deep hole. Ohmy gosh I didn’t even tell you, my name Well my name is Sammy and I am trying to find my mom and get hole well this is weird I am trying to get out of here and these white, werid, Feather, thing is coming at me. Any way I am going into this wired, wet, squishy, ground. Now I am swimming in the ocean I guess I see turtles like me young and alone. I see a cute turtle I will go ask her if she wants too swim together ahhhhhhh a perana every turtle for them selves hide omg I have to hide I see this ship I’ll swim over there. Yes no one found me well I found out her name its Samantha well I guess this is good she said yes let’s go Sammy well bye got to go bye see you later
Laianab4135
I really liked how you added so much detail and how you made the story realistic!!!
– Amy